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Flower Vase Child by Benjamin-Biddix Flower Vase Child by Benjamin-Biddix
Isn't she adorable?
#2HB school pencil was used.
(Don't forget about critqes)
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What I see when I first look at this piece is that it's supposed to be an exercise in simplicity. And I like it for that. I think it helps that it remains uncolored (although pale, unobtrusive colors would have worked as well) and that the figure itself is very simple in construction. If I had to give one point of criticism, it's that the hair is way too busy compared to everything else, and that my attention immediately goes there. I think it would work out better if the hair had less detail and if you judiciously applied shading techniques to it in order to give it the depth that it needs to be believable. To a lesser extent, the shading could be a bit more believable, but it doesn't detract at all from the overall piece.

I very much like the finished product. It's very cute and nice to look at. Good job overall.
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:iconfruitncreme:
FruitnCreme Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
darn you got skillz.. :D
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
[blushing intensifies]
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:iconlu-luna:
Lu-Luna Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
Very nice Love 
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:la: Thank you!
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:iconlu-luna:
Lu-Luna Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
Your welcome :happybounce: 
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:iconraqonteur:
Raqonteur Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She's cute... but also rather creepy.
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was going for that. :shifty:
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:iconvusiuz:
Vusiuz Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013   Filmographer
simple and cute :nod:
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for your feedback.
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:iconvusiuz:
Vusiuz Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013   Filmographer
:iconchuplz: you're welcome mah friend :D
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:iconwdnest:
wdnest Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Professional Writer
wdnest.deviantart.com/journal/… Yes she is adorable.
I have featured her at this link
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:iconbonnieknox:
BonnieKnox Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I do not normally dig cute things like this, but I like it, specially the hair :)
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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:iconbonnieknox:
BonnieKnox Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome :)
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:icondevilkid-chan:
DevilKid-chan Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very sweet :aww:
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks I need to make a color version one day though. :B
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:icondevilkid-chan:
DevilKid-chan Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Welcome :)

Why not today? :lol:

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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't want to color on such a shaded image...it would look too dark and smudged.
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:icondevilkid-chan:
DevilKid-chan Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You could always trace and redraw it.
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I could.
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:icondevilkid-chan:
DevilKid-chan Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod:
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:iconmayya447:
MaYyA447 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sooo adorable ,:iconyuiwahplz: i liked it a lot !!
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:B Thanks.
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:iconphotoshopgirl29:
PhotoshopGirl29 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This turned out very nice!
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope that my future ones turn out better though. :la:
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:iconphotoshopgirl29:
PhotoshopGirl29 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:) I am sure they will. I also have a photography page on FB, I hope you might check it out and like my page. Here is the link: www.facebook.com/pages/Photogr...
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:iconzombiequeen368:
ZombieQueen368 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
how do I put ze flowers in!? :iconimshockedplz:
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't know. :meow:
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:iconzombiequeen368:
ZombieQueen368 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
lol :D she so kawaii
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:iconramwoc87:
RAMWOC87 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The hair is amazing! Great job.
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :B
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:iconramwoc87:
RAMWOC87 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconaikoudesu:
AikouDesu Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah~ This is cute! I love how you shaded her body!
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :B
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:iconwerewolf96:
WereWolf96 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
Cute c:
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsnugplz:
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:iconwerewolf96:
WereWolf96 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
Ho ho c:
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:iconlu-luna:
Lu-Luna Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
Amazing job
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, but I still need to do a colored version. :B
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:iconlainylu:
LainyLu Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This reminds me of a book called Ghost Girl. lol awesome work ^^
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I might look that book up.
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:iconfibisugar:
fibisugar Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Beautitful
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks you....and the watch. :heart:
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:iconfibisugar:
fibisugar Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
yw :P
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:iconc-o-n-e-c-o:
C-O-N-E-C-O Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
The simplicity really works, very nice
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks there. (sorry for the late reply)
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:iconmirisperspective:
MirisPerspective Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This looks nice! I like the character, even if the picture gives a somehow sad expression. The shading looks good, too! And I like that you left the flower in pure white.
The only thing I would critizize is that the lineart could be a little cleaner ;)
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:iconbenjamin-biddix:
Benjamin-Biddix Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I will work on cleaner lines. :salute: Thanks.
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MirisPerspective Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Roger that!
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Deadly-Tea-Party Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Professional General Artist
Aww this is so lovely! I love how simple it is. :XD:
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